Law in Contemporary Society

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 The Seventeenth
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 Nose to stone you learn the language- Build to the veneer.
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Blinking, blinking—never seeing
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Blinking, blinking; never seeing
 That which causes Senseless blinking. Never once appreciating fear.
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 Should you walk the path unbeaten, You may find a Most unsettling
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Open field—your own unnat’ral Arc.
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Open field: your own unnat'ral Arc.
 Shy away from self-inspection- Something for the pain.
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Pour it heavy—pour it three times.
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Pour it heavy; pour it three times.
 Feed the demons, Calm the tremors, Soak the soil with your new brand of stain.
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 Welcome: Emotional Vagrancies.

Don the suit and play with players-

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Don’t look down inside.
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Don't look down inside.
 Vertigo awaits the searcher. Topsy turvy, Turn back outward. World turns too, and flattens out the slide.
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Make the “novel” calculation-
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Make the novel calculation-
 Give so you may take. Keep one foot inside your conscience. Come Reckoning,
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 Forge the bonds and make connections. Look at people Not as people.
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Don’t forget to go meet your partner.
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Don't forget to go meet your partner.
 Greet the dawn with trepidation- Each day is a start. Each start gains its paranoia From the others, From the silence
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Beck’ning you to lock away your heart.
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Beck'ning you to lock away your heart.
 Hundred vacant helpless helpers- Peerless peers who peer.
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 Reach my ears and Pull me from the loneliness of here.
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Moment’s peace of real connection-
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Moment's peace of real connection-
 Cut down by the clock. Substantive: the change of setting Seems to bring out
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 Dilate pupils, Gaze upon the floor at all your gains.
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Hop aboard with primed exub’rance-
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Hop aboard with primed exub'rance-
 Cars back from the helm. Know not who conducts the engine As you whistle
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 Buy into the buying into- Strong memetic stride. Comfort in the trail emblazoned
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With the blazers’
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With the blazers'
 Blazers that you Hope can manufacture you some pride.

Courting courts of every corpus- Implicated brand.

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Hold together how you they hold you,
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Hold together how they hold you,
 Sweating missiles As you yearn for Anonymity, the far off land.
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 Comes the last approach the first time- Climb into the pit.
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Wonder about others’ wond’rings:
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Wonder about others' wond'rings:
 Do they dabble? Clean or ragged?
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Who’s to say what you should not permit?
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Who's to say what you should not permit?
 Callous now the numbing ceases- Fool yourself tonight. Shunt the negative suggestions, Turning up to Turn them down and
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Make them know it’s not your place to fight.
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Make them know it's not your place to fight.
 Guilt in droves at every angle- Let them make you up. Keep that shred of confirmation As you slink back Into borrowed
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Robes, still clenching someone else’s cup.
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Robes, still clenching someone else's cup.
 Understand the farce unbreaking- Mass hypnotic march.
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Who among us won’t point fingers?
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Who among us won't point fingers?
 Who among us
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Won’t point fingers
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Won't point fingers
 Out from under cover of the arch?

Empty eyes and salutations-

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 Fein the valor look. Ride the costume from the collar, Choking on the
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Mem’ry of the
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Mem'ry of the
 Fiction you once battled on the hook.

Quiet now return to prior-

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 Soon we will shed all approval- Take the step to then.
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Cry out when the last bell’s finished.
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Cry out when the last bell's finished.
 Brassy round tones Mark your essence, Riding on the missive and the pen.

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