Law in Contemporary Society

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 Race Japan is not nearly as racially homogenous as the Japanese often suppose it is. Of course, the largest minorities in Japan are largely indistinguishable by physical characteristics. The fact of the matter is, Japanese people believe their society is racially homogenous, and that really does a lot of work towards cementing kinship.

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