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  • These comments are an accurate statement of my experience with this paper. I began the project with the intention of demonstrating to the author that the essay's language and structure could be simplified while maintaining its message. You are right that I reached the barrier of not being able to step into the author's "shoes." In another setting, the streamlined second draft would have gone back to the author for a third draft in which he would shape the personal message. Actually, I think the author's own edits of his first paper accomplish this goal quite well.
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